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X. P. Callahan's avatar

Exposition in dialogue. I will bail immediately.

Lev Raphael's avatar

It makes anything sound like a daytime soap.

M.E. Proctor's avatar

I can't stand the "we have to hurry", followed by 15 minutes of jabbering....

Lev Raphael's avatar

Yes, and often it's exposition.

Terry Odell's avatar

Cops not waiting for backup. Cops accepting help from amateurs. Detectives going in ahead of the SWAT team. Cops deciding to disregard orders/procedure.

Liz Gauffreau's avatar

You’ve hit all of mine, Terry. Civilians “assisting the police with their inquiries” drives me up the wall, particularly when they pocket evidence from the crime scene. If some stranger knocked at my door

to ask me questions about a crime under investigation, I would ask to see their law enforcement identification. No badge? Just say no and close the door.

Lev Raphael's avatar

Badges can be faked. I've spent a lot of time interviewing a defense attorney about cop abuses for my book Assault With a Deadly Lie and you do not need to open the door unless they have a warrant. You do not ever need to talk to them. You open the door and they can end up accusing you of a crime based on something they "think" they see.

Terry Odell's avatar

Right now, there are too many instances of things not going the way the law's supposed to operate that it's a scary time.

Liz Gauffreau's avatar

I guess it's good I'm keeping a low profile these days.

Leigh Ann Wallace's avatar

Ha! You always know that person is going to be dead any second now! The only time that worked for me is when I read a story where the detective made a kind of joke about it, saying they'd be dead if they waited, and they needed to tell him now. They didn't, of course, tell him and they did die. But I feel the writer made the effort, acknowledging it.

Lev Raphael's avatar

Was the whole story a satire or was that just the joke?

Leigh Ann Wallace's avatar

I have no idea. It was a funny story, but I remember literally nothing else about it, except that.

Lev Raphael's avatar

That's what I was trying to get at--the tone of the story. Happy New Year!